Pleasant Surprise

[itsallovernow]

Haven't visited The Scapers Sanctuary for awhile, even though I've liberated a lot of their sound clips for my computer, but I dropped by to get the "What Does an American Want" speech, and ran across this:
Snowglobe.

It's a last ep/wrap up to Bad Timing script and is well done and a lot of fun. I don't recognize the author though.

And I'm becoming enamored of this CD. Kinda like the Jayhawks came to Hollywood and liked it.

Comments

[cofax7]

Thanks for the link. That was entertaining, although I have 2 quibbles: (1) Aeryn's dialog was off, and I found it distracting. (2) Everything was wrapped up too well at the end. Still, it's a good job. I should send feedback.

[thassalia.livejournal.com]

I usually have trouble reading scripts (The Whole Brain's East of Hezmana, excepted) but I enjoyed this.

I agree, it wrapped up to easily, but I liked the construct of being able to download a copy of John, and I liked Ralph; and nailing Aeryn's dialogue is something lots of authors have trouble with, so it was easier for me to forgive him that.

It's one of my problems with fic in general. I have such a sense of how the characters speak, what they should say and sound like, and yet it's still so easy for writers to completely miss the boat on that. I thought he did good John dialog though, which is a harder thing than it appears to be, at least based on my fic reading:)