Blue Eyes - So close to actual plot

The plot is in sight, I just have to stretch a little further! suelac is undoubtedly right. This would function much better with only two POV switches, however, I kind of wrote myself into a corner with this chapter and will try and do the two POV's from now on, but no promises. I'm thinking it will all happen in the rewrites. Again, it's rough, rough, rough.

To catch up, go here: Chapter Five

( Chapter Six )

And on to Chapter Seven

I started to write this chapter, realized that I was just playing and that it contains very little plot forwarding, so be forwarned, it's a lot of rambling, but I just wasn't ready to jump back to John,

( Chapter Seven )