That would indeed be far more clever - and actually would track a lot better, especially with Aeryn, who is more likely to have to have to talk herself out of the physical. She is the one who sets them off after all. Thanks for the suggestion!
Even a word change here could do it:
His body is solid and warm and her instincts should be screaming at her to push him away. They aren't. She doesn’t. </>
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Date: 2003-06-05 12:27 pm (UTC)Even a word change here could do it:
His body is solid and warm and her instincts should be screaming at her to push him away. They aren't. She doesn’t. </>