*bg* Thanks for the praise:) I think it's pretty done, reading it again, there are still a few things I want to tweak and refine, and I toyed with adding a final John POV, but that seems like overkill, so I'll probably leave it.
This is the line I think I should cut, but I'm totally justifying it by saying John was getting pretty loopy in the beginning of Season 2.
It’s moments like these when he wants to scoop her up, teach her to dance, write her bad poetry, nibble her ears, find some good drugs and see god in the stars. Pretend the past cycle was one big, bad acid trip. She’s a pain in the ass, constantly riding his, but in rare moments like these, he absolutely adores her
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Date: 2003-07-22 10:01 am (UTC)This is the line I think I should cut, but I'm totally justifying it by saying John was getting pretty loopy in the beginning of Season 2.
It’s moments like these when he wants to scoop her up, teach her to dance, write her bad poetry, nibble her ears, find some good drugs and see god in the stars. Pretend the past cycle was one big, bad acid trip. She’s a pain in the ass, constantly riding his, but in rare moments like these, he absolutely adores her