ext_2020 ([identity profile] spoonishly.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] itsallovernow 2003-10-24 04:13 am (UTC)

Wow. That is gorgeous. Flows well and the narration makes it work.

The first image of Chiana on the grass is so vivid, so beautifully painted. And wet!John is always nice.

Well done.

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