It's so strangely absurd, but who doesn't think, Hooray Beer once in a while?
My love of beer is all sparkly and new, so I say it about once a week 8 )
yes I am almost 30 but I still feel the overwhelming need to buy goth girl t-shirts at Hot Topic.
Hot Topic! *claps hands and shows off black and white saddle shoe Mary Janes* What concerns me is the shoppers and clerks who take it so seriously. Dude, you're in a chain store, this is cheap fun goth we're talking about here.
John wiping himself off after sex. That sold me right there.
*skipping the rest of that bit because it makes me want to slink under a rock and make Stark noises*
I debated the sheet bit for a few moments, because I didn't want it to be sordid, but it's such a messy encounter and I'm autistic about details like that. I'm still kind of lukewarm on the scene itself because it was such a fight between being true to their weird-ass denial and trying to show the cracks. I'm still uncomfortable writing this kind of thing, but the characters are also uncomfortable, so my own emotional squickiness serves the scene, I think. I'm glad it works, but I'm not confident on how or why it works.
That worst part is that eventually, she'll finish the story, and then what will we do?
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My love of beer is all sparkly and new, so I say it about once a week 8 )
yes I am almost 30 but I still feel the overwhelming need to buy goth girl t-shirts at Hot Topic.
Hot Topic! *claps hands and shows off black and white saddle shoe Mary Janes* What concerns me is the shoppers and clerks who take it so seriously. Dude, you're in a chain store, this is cheap fun goth we're talking about here.
John wiping himself off after sex. That sold me right there.
*skipping the rest of that bit because it makes me want to slink under a rock and make Stark noises*
I debated the sheet bit for a few moments, because I didn't want it to be sordid, but it's such a messy encounter and I'm autistic about details like that. I'm still kind of lukewarm on the scene itself because it was such a fight between being true to their weird-ass denial and trying to show the cracks. I'm still uncomfortable writing this kind of thing, but the characters are also uncomfortable, so my own emotional squickiness serves the scene, I think. I'm glad it works, but I'm not confident on how or why it works.
That worst part is that eventually, she'll finish the story, and then what will we do?
Beer and beta!