No, I agree completely. I'm trying to do this as a rough draft, and am posting because otherwise I'll run screaming from the plot element and quit writing this story:)

I wanted to get the first four voices out there, and then try to move forward a little more. I like the idea of overlap, but I just seem to be doling out the same information over and over againg instead of moving forward which was the intention. There is already significant macheteing needed, even in these first for chapters.

Thanks for the feedback! It is really much appreciated.